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Damaera
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Thursday, January 28, 2010
Okay I'm just a beginner so don't be harsh!
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okay well I was reading the Dragon Ball Z story someone made, and I was like..... What the heck, I should make one too! So here it is:
The Saiyan
Battles
Characters:
Goku
Vegeta
Gohan
Goten
Trunks
Chi-Chi(whatever)
Bulma
Krillin
Isaac(New)
Other people
channel.1
The big train
Hey dad, Lets train! Isaac yelled.
Okay what ever. Goku said.
Ready FIGHT!!!! Gohan yelled
HHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Isaac screamed by going Super Saiyan.AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH†Goku screamed, The ground shook and Goku went Super Saiyan.
Ka-Me-Ha-Me-HA!!!!Whoa! you're strong Isaac! Goku said. What the heck?†OW that hurt! Okay, Okay Isaac you win!Goku said. Good I'm happy we are done because I'm hungry!
Heh Heh HehYoure getting just like me son!
channel.2
Majin Buu
What the heck was that! Isaac said curiosly. Buuuuuuuuu!!!!!!! Buu flew and ran into the house Holy **** your lipid! Goku said. Buu no like you! Buu *****-slap you! Buu said like a mental good guy. No you dontAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Time to die hunk of a man! Goku said
What the heck are you doing dad! Isaac said. Isaac bake some apple pie I know what I'm doing Goku said.
Okay, What ever you say
œBBUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!Ow That hunk of a man hurt me!I told you dad! Now its my turn!
channel.3
Isaac Vs. Buu
Its over now Buu, You should never hurt my dad!I can kick your buttocks too! Buu said What ever hunk of a man.KAMEHAMEHAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
What the heck are you doing! You are hurting the badass of all Majin Buu!!
I told you I would kick your buttocks!
To be continued
Tomorrow
Well tell me how it was, it may rule too but who cares the heck with it it was fun
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Zeth
The Admin
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Thursday, January 28, 2010
Obviously plagiarized.
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TheXenon
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Thursday, January 28, 2010
Zeth wrote : Obviously plagiarized.
You've seen this before?
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brendon
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Thursday, January 28, 2010
weirdest thing I have ever read *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* ah I'm going crazy
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ESFER25
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Friday, January 29, 2010
kidgoku wrote : weirdest thing I have ever read *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* ah I'm going crazy
There are a lot of them in a lot forums. I never read it because it's too long and it's always the same trash.
I'll try read this one if I have enought motivation for read bunches and bunches words
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Konan
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Friday, January 29, 2010
Good for ppls who know good English..
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ESFER25
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Friday, January 29, 2010
Konan wrote : Good for ppls who know good English.. 
I speak no know don't English
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Malek
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Friday, January 29, 2010
*laughing out loud* I like the Buu story
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TheXenon
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Friday, January 29, 2010
Zeth says it's copied from someone... Also known as Isn't Damaera's work.
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ESFER25
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Friday, January 29, 2010
He copied it from himself on esforces forum!!!
http://forum.esforces.com/threads/76881-My-Dragonball-Z-Fanfic!
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Alex
Al Knows
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Friday, January 29, 2010
Zeth wrote : Obviously plagiarized.
I'd say fanfics of that astounding quality are beyond capable of being plagurized, they're utterly immune to it
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TheXenon
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Friday, January 29, 2010
Agreed.. It's too horrible to be plagiarized.
by the way you spelt plagiarized wrong.
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Konan
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Friday, January 29, 2010
All of you like Dragon Ball A F, but don't like that new story? Than just sit and watch 999x times the old series..
yay
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TRL
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Friday, January 29, 2010
noone likes A F
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Damaera
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Friday, January 29, 2010
Zeth wrote : Obviously plagiarized. Alright, I'll tell the truth.
I plagiarized this from myself.
DUNN DUNNN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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Zeth
The Admin
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Friday, January 29, 2010
I was, of course, being super facetious.
But where's chapter 3 at? I must know what happens next!
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brendon
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Friday, January 29, 2010
nope I don't understand it at all DUDE!!!!*laughing out loud*!!!!
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The-Kakarotto
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Saturday, January 30, 2010
Not bad
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