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Read my Dragon Ball Z FANFIC!!

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Damaera View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Thursday, January 28, 2010

Okay I'm just a beginner so don't be harsh!

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okay well I was reading the Dragon Ball Z story someone made, and I was like..... What the heck, I should make one too! So here it is:

The Saiyan
Battles


Characters:
Goku
Vegeta
Gohan
Goten
Trunks
Chi-Chi(whatever)
Bulma
Krillin
Isaac(New)
Other people




channel.1
The big train

Hey dad, Lets train! Isaac yelled.
Okay what ever. Goku said.
Ready FIGHT!!!! Gohan yelled
HHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Isaac screamed by going Super Saiyan.AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” Goku screamed, The ground shook and Goku went Super Saiyan.

Ka-Me-Ha-Me-HA!!!!Whoa! you're strong Isaac! Goku said. What the heck?” OW that hurt! Okay, Okay Isaac you win!Goku said. Good I'm happy we are done because I'm hungry!
Heh Heh HehYoure getting just like me son!






channel.2
Majin Buu


What the heck was that! Isaac said curiosly. Buuuuuuuuu!!!!!!! Buu flew and ran into the house Holy **** your lipid! Goku said. Buu no like you! Buu *****-slap you! Buu said like a mental good guy. No you dontAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Time to die hunk of a man! Goku said

What the heck are you doing dad! Isaac said. Isaac bake some apple pie I know what I'm doing Goku said.
Okay, What ever you say

œBBUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!Ow That hunk of a man hurt me!I told you dad! Now its my turn!
channel.3
Isaac Vs. Buu

Its over now Buu, You should never hurt my dad!I can kick your buttocks too! Buu said What ever hunk of a man.KAMEHAMEHAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

What the heck are you doing! You are hurting the badass of all Majin Buu!!

I told you I would kick your buttocks!





To be continued
Tomorrow






Well tell me how it was, it may rule too but who cares the heck with it it was fun

Zeth The Admin View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Thursday, January 28, 2010

Obviously plagiarized.

TheXenon View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Thursday, January 28, 2010

Zeth wrote : Obviously plagiarized.



You've seen this before?

brendon View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Thursday, January 28, 2010

weirdest thing I have ever read *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* ah I'm going crazy

ESFER25 View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

kidgoku wrote : weirdest thing I have ever read *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* *laughing out loud* ah I'm going crazy



There are a lot of them in a lot forums. I never read it because it's too long and it's always the same trash.

I'll try read this one if I have enought motivation for read bunches and bunches words Laughing

Konan View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

Good for ppls who know good English.. Very Happy Smile

ESFER25 View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

Konan wrote : Good for ppls who know good English.. Very Happy Smile



I speak no know don't English Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

Malek View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

*laughing out loud* I like the Buu story

TheXenon View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

Zeth says it's copied from someone... Also known as Isn't Damaera's work.

ESFER25 View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

He copied it from himself on esforces forum!!!

http://forum.esforces.com/threads/76881-My-Dragonball-Z-Fanfic!


Laughing Laughing

Alex Al Knows View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

Zeth wrote : Obviously plagiarized.



I'd say fanfics of that astounding quality are beyond capable of being plagurized, they're utterly immune to it Wink

TheXenon View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

Agreed.. It's too horrible to be plagiarized.

by the way you spelt plagiarized wrong.

Konan View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

All of you like Dragon Ball A F, but don't like that new story? Than just sit and watch 999x times the old series.. Very Happy

yay


TRL View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

noone likes A F

Damaera View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

Zeth wrote : Obviously plagiarized.

Alright, I'll tell the truth.

I plagiarized this from myself.

DUNN DUNNN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

Zeth The Admin View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

I was, of course, being super facetious. Razz
But where's chapter 3 at? I must know what happens next!

brendon View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Friday, January 29, 2010

nope I don't understand it at all Shocked Shocked Shocked Cool DUDE!!!!*laughing out loud*!!!!

The-Kakarotto View user's profile Send private message

Reply with quote Saturday, January 30, 2010

Not bad Razz

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