ZEQ2 Lite

Friday, March 30, 2012

wow nello!

Friday, March 30, 2012

NELLO!! wrote : oh I'm sorry .....can add this also later, connect edges..
I can control the work everytime( add or remove)..

Sweet man

Friday, March 30, 2012

up ..the head is textured..

Friday, March 30, 2012

up

Friday, March 30, 2012

NELLO!! wrote : up

cool

Friday, March 30, 2012

Looks awesome, but you need to redraw the ear, it looks kind of wonky.

Friday, March 30, 2012

How much refs do you have Nello?

I have a feeling you need to improve your ref searching skills. I already got you a bunch of them once by the way when you first made toma.

The hair looks off from the side view. The hair line and jaw line need some fixing too. Also what's that line on his chin? Did you just invent that? Recoome has that, not Toma.

Also the face structure is not visible at all from the side view. You should see the cheek bone, some eyebrow definition, etc.

It's a great start for your first head model, so good job man, but I'm sure you can do better in accuracy!

Friday, March 30, 2012

my refs.. and new up.. and thanks
(I have to edit many things I know)

Friday, March 30, 2012

Well don't give up and you'll get it right.

Indeed there are many things to fix for now.

Friday, March 30, 2012

TRL wrote :

Indeed there are many things to fix for now.

Indeed. Like moustache adding.

Friday, March 30, 2012

up again

Friday, March 30, 2012

mmm...very good my friend ..now you should improve the face and other things

Friday, March 30, 2012

Improving.

The basic shape of his head is a rectangle, you have it as an ellipse. So the first part of his hairline (starting from the ears) should be more vertical. The first part of the jaw line should be more vertical too. Actually there both almost perfectly vertical.

Then the ears should be bigger and better viewable from the front.

The hair is a lot longer. And goes back from the side view, you have it going forward instead of backward. The straight lines are also very important in the design of the hair.
Also the forehead should be longer and the chin a bit shorter.

The line details on the above and on the side of his eyebrows should be smaller, lower and more to the side.

I would put the wrinkles between his eyebrows a little lower so he has a more serious look. Now he's more like Gohan or Yamucha.

I think the nose and the mouth are a bit too wide. And you should remove the wrinkle around his mouth if he's not actually smirking (smiling).







Paste one of these links for a full body ref from a model sheet.
http://violentpeacefulchild.tripod.com/adm/interstitial/remote.jpg
http://Dragon Ball Z.cliffhk.com/people/other/toma.png

Friday, March 30, 2012

all right I have found the mystery of of this face ..
this is my best for this day..
in 2 days I have done this head ..how I am?

me while you were looking for refs, and writing advice I was thinking the same ..

are still things to do but it is much better than before ..

Friday, March 30, 2012

That's already looking a lot better Nello. You're almost there! Just read my tips and you'll be fine.

Also Dragonball blogspot for more refs. A good side one and battle damaged front one in there.

http://thedragonballblog.blogspot.com/2012/03/dragon-ball-z-final-solitary-battle-z.html

Friday, March 30, 2012

looking good nello

Friday, March 30, 2012

NELLO!! wrote : all right I have found the mystery of of this face ..
this is my best for this day..
in 2 days I have done this head ..how I am?

me while you were looking for refs, and writing advice I was thinking the same ..

are still things to do but it is much better than before ..

Bravissimo(very good) Nello ..continue in this way...You're almost to the goal

Friday, March 30, 2012

Nice Work Nello!

Friday, March 30, 2012

Now he kind of looks like Bruce Lee.

Saturday, March 31, 2012

NELLO!! wrote : all right I have found the mystery of of this face ..
this is my best for this day..
in 2 days I have done this head ..how I am?

me while you were looking for refs, and writing advice I was thinking the same ..

are still things to do but it is much better than before ..

Great man.Welldone.

Saturday, March 31, 2012

Nello this is unreal professional work!!!!

Saturday, March 31, 2012

Gunny Jr wrote : Now he kind of looks like Bruce Lee.

Now that I think about it, Toma's features look almost Italian(in my opinion).

Saturday, March 31, 2012

JayREEZY wrote :

Gunny Jr wrote : Now he kind of looks like Bruce Lee.

Now that I think about it, Toma's features look almost Italian(in my opinion).

He looks espically Italian with a moustache.

Saturday, March 31, 2012

NOTHING IS BETTER WITH A moustache... except peter.