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killmeplz
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 Thursday, September 23, 2010
hey guys just I got a new printer and just introducing some stuff I've been working on
I could use some constructive criticism so..
here something I've been working on
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jag
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Friday, September 24, 2010
Just escaped a monastery ? 
No off. but they are all immutable belief
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Shenku
RiO Incarnate
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Friday, September 24, 2010
The details look good, and the drawings are pretty solid, but it seems like you may need to work on posing the characters a little. They just feel a bit stiff.
Otherwise, they're pretty good, keep it up. 
(Religiou s based art doesn't bother me too much, provided it's tasteful, especially since some of the greatest paintings ever done were during the renaissance period and were religiou s in some way or another.)
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killmeplz
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Friday, September 24, 2010
they are immutable belief however this is because in my story there is a lucifer arc or chapter
the main protaganists is warped to a different universe aside from his own and in the universe the apoclyspe has started and he has fogotten who he was and wakes up in an deserted building
but that's for something else here are some others
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killmeplz
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Friday, September 24, 2010
I still have many more and it's the first time I revealed these online you guys will be the first to see em all
I will continue to scan my drawing and post em here
I might also post em at deviant art to
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killmeplz
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Friday, September 24, 2010
jaguar wrote : Just escaped a monastery ?
No off. but they are all religiou s
what sort of constructive criticism is that?
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Shenku
RiO Incarnate
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Friday, September 24, 2010
Hmm, some of those are really good. You should definitely post them up on deviant art.
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killmeplz
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Saturday, September 25, 2010
thanks I'll do that and about my posing? what could I do to make them less stiff I'm not sure I understand since I can't make a mobile drawing *laughing out loud*
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Shenku
RiO Incarnate
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Sunday, September 26, 2010
killmeplz wrote : thanks I'll do that and about my posing? what could I do to make them less stiff I'm not sure I understand since I can't make a mobile drawing *laughing out loud*
There's a few things you could try, but a good place to start might be with looking at how others pose their characters. By stiff, I mean the character doesn't appear to be posed naturally.
Some tips might be to keep things loose, and draw the character how a real person would look in that pose.(Maybe ask someone to pose for you to draw them)
Arms aren't always flat at a person's sides, facial expressions are rarely blank, and drawing in perspective can help as well.(By in perspective, I mean making it seem like the character is standing at a slight angle, one foot would be lower and seem to be pointing forward while the other is almost horrizontal with the page, one eye might be more visible than the other, and other things like that...)
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killmeplz
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Sunday, September 26, 2010
sounds good I'll see what I can do but so far what I'm doing is creating and I'll be re drawing the characters till I get it right(perfect)^_^ so yeah I'll see what I can do
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