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Acaryus
Cutting-Edge
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 Wednesday, April 27, 2011
I decided to finish this and here he is!
I'd like to hear some opinions
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TRL
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Wednesday, April 27, 2011
Pretty neat texturing, but the model itself needs some work on it.
The nose needs to look more like a snout. The shape has to extrude and you need a textured line for that upside down heart shape. The mouth also should be closer under the snout.
The tips of his ears should flip over more.
His pupils should be smaller and his eyes closer to together.
Finally the positioning of all the facial features could be worked on as well.
Then there's the body, but you can work out the kinks following this ref pretty closely.
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Acaryus
Cutting-Edge
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Wednesday, April 27, 2011
TRL wrote : Pretty neat texturing, but the model itself needs some work on it.
The nose needs to look more like a snout. The shape has to extrude and you need a textured line for that upside down heart shape. The mouth also should be closer under the snout.
The tips of his ears should flip over more.
His pupils should be smaller and his eyes closer to together.
Finally the positioning of all the facial features could be worked on as well.
Then there's the body, but you can work out the kinks following this ref pretty closely.
That was fast lo*l,I will try to fix it,thanks.
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TRL
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Wednesday, April 27, 2011
Here's a quick drawover. Specifically notice the added line details here and there that help define the shape.
The arms should be a lot more chubby and short, plus the shape of the pants needs an overhaul, because right now it looks like he doesn't have a waist. The pants should go higher up too.
I also reshaped the head a little bit.
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suckapunch
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Wednesday, April 27, 2011
TRL wrote : Here's a quick drawover. Specifically notice the added line details here and there that help define the shape.
The arms should be a lot more chubby and short, plus the shape of the pants needs an overhaul, because right now it looks like he doesn't have a waist. The pants should go higher up too.
I also reshaped the head a little bit.
Nice job both of you!
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RealDeal
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Thursday, April 28, 2011
Acaryus wrote : I decided to finish this and here he is!
I'd like to hear some opinions
what will oolong do in game,he has no powers
I got it when you kill 100 people online oolong will get unlocked 
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Acaryus
Cutting-Edge
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Thursday, April 28, 2011
Up
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Dokumas
Jamaicabronx
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Thursday, April 28, 2011
O.O Its amazing!
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TRL
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Thursday, April 28, 2011
Wow you pretty much nailed most of the changes.
That's some good eyes for detail.
I would still lower the eyes a bit almost right to the level of the nose. Make them a little bigger and the pupils a little bigger too. Make sure the pupils are inside of the white otherwise it can look like he's crosseyed.
The mouth still needs to be moved up, closer to the nose.
And the line detail for the nose is still needed.
I would make his head a little less wide, so it looks longer than it's wide.
And you might have overdone it a bit around the waist. So the hips may be so wide, but the upper body isn't, he doesn't really have a lipid belly.
Oh and I would add black lines to his orange suspenders.
Maybe a ink n paint render with outlines would look nicer too. Just adjust the thickness until it looks good.
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Acaryus
Cutting-Edge
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Thursday, April 28, 2011
The head is now little less wide and trying to make that line detail on the nose,also added black lines to his suspenders.
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mcgrass
Beta Trapezoid
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Thursday, April 28, 2011
Acaryus wrote :
The head is now little less wide and trying to make that line detail on the nose,also added black lines to his suspenders.
That's simply awesome ^^ great work
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TRL
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Thursday, April 28, 2011
Nice. Except for the nose and mouth I'd say he's almost finished.
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Acaryus
Cutting-Edge
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Thursday, April 28, 2011
TRL wrote : Nice. Except for the nose and mouth I'd say he's almost finished.
Thanks man! I appreciate your help! 
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Raging-Blast
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Thursday, April 28, 2011
Acaryus wrote :
The head is now little less wide and trying to make that line detail on the nose,also added black lines to his suspenders.
Great work! Can't wait to see the final model 
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LegendarySS4
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Thursday, April 28, 2011
Raging-Blast wrote : Acaryus wrote :
The head is now little less wide and trying to make that line detail on the nose,also added black lines to his suspenders.
Great work! Can't wait to see the final model
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Nemix
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Thursday, April 28, 2011
Great model, but it's kind of lacking in identifiable function, he would rule as a playable character.
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SAMCROSS
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Thursday, April 28, 2011
What would be his attacks Nemix ?
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mcgrass
Beta Trapezoid
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Friday, April 29, 2011
SAMCROSS wrote : What would be his attacks Nemix ? :*laughing out loud*:
He was able to morph into other creatures... *intense laughter*
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NabaKonvecit
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Friday, April 29, 2011
what really ?? I didn't know that he would stronger than Vegeta Jr. or all the kabagens
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mcgrass
Beta Trapezoid
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Friday, April 29, 2011
nabako wrote : what really ?? I didn't know that he would stronger than Vegeta Jr. or all the kabagens
Acctually he was weaker than Bulma *intense laughter*
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NabaKonvecit
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Friday, April 29, 2011
Nappa what does the scouter say about her power level
Vegeta its over 9001
Nappa what really
Vegeta yeah
Nappa than what's her panties power level
Vegeta its over 90001
Nappa that's a lot she's going to kick our behinds lets retreat
Vegeta blows Nappa
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rasengan
Gradual Miracle
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Sunday, May 01, 2011
nice Acaryus ! 
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paradise.engineering
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Tuesday, May 03, 2011
haha very cool!!
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Nemix
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Wednesday, May 04, 2011
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suckapunch
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Wednesday, May 04, 2011
Nemix wrote :
lololol
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